Cafe Bar Visual 2

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johnvann
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Cafe Bar Visual 2

Post by johnvann » Sat May 21, 2011 8:00 pm

Second shot at another cafe visual, tried to get more general reflection and mood into the image, rather than keeping it rather generic. Any thoughts?

Cheers
John
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bentleykf
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Re: Cafe Bar Visual 2

Post by bentleykf » Mon May 23, 2011 4:49 am

Looks pretty good john. I've got a couple of suggestions, but they're just my opinion so don't take it as a critique.

Imo the bloom's a little too much on the counter. I haven't tried this yet but you could create a low bloom and high bloom render, then stitch the images together in photoshop.

There's also a slight artefact in the top corner of the walls. You could probably burn or clone this out in photoshop.

The bloom on the aspretto logo display at the very right of the image is a bit distracting.

Also, I would add a kickboard to the counter at its base to give it a good shadow line, kind of like this:
copy_0_counter_inc_till_skinlab__lowres.jpg
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Otherwise, very nice render, excellent textures and good use of reflective surfaces.

-niall

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